Talk:Kayak Point County Park

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What is a "kite shelter"? A shelter sounds like the opposite of what kite enthusiasts would want. ? Bri (talk) 07:18, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:19, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

Lead is too brief, I'd expect to see at least twice as much detail than the three sentences which are currently provided, especially as most of the lead is already noted in the infobox.
- Y Expanded the lead.
I would urge caution over wikilinking common terms like "beach" or "sand".
- Y Fixed
"3 ft (1 m) [1]" space between measurement and reference is unnecessary.
- N The space is inserted by the infobox
Seattle is linked second time round.
- Y Fixed
"$75 each," might be interesting to see what that's worth in current values?
- Y Added inflation-adjusted figure
"$100 million refinery" similar, as $100m in 1967 is probably quite a substantial investment.
- Y Added inflation-adjusted figure
"Atlantic Ritchfield" typo.
- Y Fixed
"Washington State Supreme Court" doesn't appear to have the word "State" in its official title.
- Y Fixed
"Kayak Point is a cuspate foreland on..." suddenly linking Kayak Point here?
- Y Removed
"cabins" is a dab link.
- Y Removed

Neat work, a few minor points to address, so on hold. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:35, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

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